I am a Year 4 student in the Uru Mānuka Cluster. My teacher is Mrs McIntyre. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first drafts. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
Friday, February 26, 2021
2 comments:
To support my learning I ask you to comment as follows:
1. Something positive - Begin with a greeting. Talk about something you like about what I have shared.
2. Thoughtful - A comment that will mean something to me to let me know you read/watched or listened to what I had to say. - use any language.
3. Something helpful - Give me some ideas for next time or ask me a question.
Encourage me to make another post.
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Hey there,
ReplyDeleteI'm Mrs McIntyre from SHS. I love the text that you chose for your poem. I was interested to read that you like running on the beach, this reminds me that I am starting to run myself. I am finding it hard. Next time you could use some different colours or add pictures to your work. How did you get the text so fancy?
Have a great day,
Mrs M
hey there im Ricardo from south hornby shcool
ReplyDeletei enjoyed the part when you said nice stuff about you
i didit no that you like to go on mountains
have you thought to add more to your work
when do you run on the beach
can´t wait to read for your reply Ricardo