Friday, February 26, 2021

My poem


 

2 comments:

  1. Hey there,
    I'm Mrs McIntyre from SHS. I love the text that you chose for your poem. I was interested to read that you like running on the beach, this reminds me that I am starting to run myself. I am finding it hard. Next time you could use some different colours or add pictures to your work. How did you get the text so fancy?
    Have a great day,
    Mrs M

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  2. hey there im Ricardo from south hornby shcool
    i enjoyed the part when you said nice stuff about you
    i didit no that you like to go on mountains
    have you thought to add more to your work
    when do you run on the beach
    can´t wait to read for your reply Ricardo

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